Design Research Dissertation/ Draft Dissertation

2 SEP 2022 - 14 OCT 2022 ( WEEK 1 - WEEK 7)

Lum Qian Tong 0344309 Bachelor of Design in Creative Media

Design Research Dissertation

Draft Dissertation 

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All of the notes needed for this task are listed below :

• Visual Design Publication Final Dissertation & TURNITIN submission [Link]
• Research for Article Publication[Link] 
• Final Compilation & Reflection [Link] 

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Instruction

Draft Dissertation

Ms. Jinchi briefed us on the first task for the Design Research Dissertation, and I straightaway began working on my analysis and discussion because Ms. Jinchi mentioned, this would be the most challenging part of the task. When I received Ms. Jinchi's feedback, I will start rewriting the analysis and discussion and working on another section of the Dissertation.

Figure 1.0 Draft Dissertation Attempt 1

~After receiving email feedback from Ms. Jinchi, I began out to adjust and adapt and add in new information.

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Feedback

Week 2

General Feedback:

~Changing the 1st research question into "What are the key graphic design elements found in common signages?"

~Open a new slide which structures my discussion.

~Adding Introduction, heading and suggested some ideas to write it

Week 3

General Feedback:

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Week 4

General Feedback:

~Always cite that where it from and paraphrase.

~correction my paragraphs

Week 5

General Feedback:

~Absent

Week 6

General Feedback:

~ Modify the way to put my cite in 5.2.1 colour. I make a little small mistakes. 

~Remind the image need to write the figure.

~The content can write "The figure number show..."

~Practise using space , I was very careless even though I had double check lol ahahaha

~5.2.3 Typography "Consider carefully..." is more like teaching people how to design, so I need to reword into my own word.

~At the end, I need to write an abstract and finish all of them before next sunday.

~Ms Jinchi show me the example of dissertation and told us to follow the structure.

Week 7

General Feedback:

~ I facing a problem that is 5.3. I can write point form first. I need to used the signages that I chosen and write into 5.3.

~ Introduce what is research limitations and the suggest future

~ Remind me don't jump into conclusion

~ Abstract : a little mistakes, so far so good.